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Tytuł: najgorsze wakacje wypracowanie sprawdzenie
Wiadomość wysłana przez: klauduperek w Kwiecień 14, 2009, 09:00:07 pm
It was a sunny day,the sun ws shining and birds were singing,because it was holiday. When I woke up I was really exciting,because it was a day when I and my parrents was flying to Canaries. After getting dressed I had breakfast but it didn't be delicious breakfast because my mother made me something what I don't like. It was wrong mark. I knew that something get wrong. Then I went with my parrents into the airport. When my mother tried fire car, she can't do it. Turned out that discharged accumulator.Quickly we called to my brother becouse he could drove with us to airport his car. When he arrived below block we rapidly ran to the car. We was very nervous becouse we didn't know whether made it on flight. When we was on airport we ran on aeroplane. Rendered that we made it [zdążyliśmy]. As soon as we left off aeroplane droped in turbulence. We was very fearful,but pilot had given us some instructions. Than, a few minutes later everything was well. Next we landed on runway,but still we was fearful. We was happy than we was there.Soon we drove to hotel because we were very tired. As soon as we came on recorded adress proved that we didn't have any reservation. We quested some accommodation but everything was engaged and we must sleeped on beach.Everything was bad but sighting and place was fantastic it was beautiful place. Next day we was really resigned and we decided that we come back home. When we got back home we went to the agency touristic and we folded complaint. Courier turned us money,but nothing didn't give back us some holiday day when we can spent fantastic time.
Tytuł: najgorsze wakacje wypracowanie sprawdzenie
Wiadomość wysłana przez: lemon w Kwiecień 15, 2009, 05:43:37 pm
Cytat: klauduperek
didn't be delicious
wasn't delicious

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something what
what to bardziej przy pytaniach, lepiej użyć that

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It was wrong mark
troche dziwne określenie ale może poprawne, nei jestem pewien

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get wrong
got

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into the airport
to the

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When my mother tried fire car
tried to. Z resztą fired raczej jest niepoprawne, nie wiem czy w Anglii używa się określanie odpalić samochód  :mrgreen:  Lepiej napisać uruchomić [trip]

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she can't do it
she couldn't. Forma przeszłą od can to could.

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Turned out that discharged accumulator
Tego nie rozumiem. Nie wiem gdzie jest podmiot.

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Quickly we called to my brother becouse he could drove with us to airport his car
Bez tego quickly i zamiast drove to drive

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whether made it on flight
?

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When we was
when we were in the airport we ran to the plane

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Rendered that
nie wiem czy to określenie jest poprawne. Zamiast zdjążlismy napisz że nie byliśmy spóźnieni.

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left
zamiast left lepiej blasted bo to wygląda jakbyście wyszli z samolotu

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pilot had given
po co past perfect? po prostu gave us

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Than, a few minutes
Zacznij od Few minutes

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we was fearful
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We was
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we was
we were

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recorded adress proved that we didn't have any reservation.
ułóz to zdanie jakoś inaczej

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must sleeped
sleep

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was fantastic it was beautiful place
jakiś przecinek daj albo zrób oddzielne zdania

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we was
were

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decided that we come back home
decidet to come back home

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nothing didn't
w angielskim nie ma podwójnego zaprzeczenia


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